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CHAPTER 2 – SHALLOW WATERS

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CHAPTER 2 

Maria Garcia ​ We pulled into a pretty big 3 story house. The house belongs to the mother of the victim, Margret Walker. Blackwell wrong the doorbell and I stood behind him waiting for Miss Walker to open the door. Pretty soon she opened the door and allowed us inside.“Miss walker we’re sorry for your loss,” Marcus tells her. “ Do you know anyone that has a grudge against her or would hurt her?” I asked. “ Hmmm, let me see,” she mumbled. “ ah, Angelica Preston, she has a thing against my Elena, ever since Elena took her spot has the star singer in the company,” she tells us.

“Does your daughter have a boyfriend or someone she was seeing?” Marcus asks. “ Yes, she was going to announce their relationship to the public soon, his name is Mason Reid,” she says. “ Did they have a fight recently?” I ask. “No, not that I know of, she was fond of him, she wanted a family with him.” “ Can you give us the names of close friends of hers?” Blackwell asked. “ She only really hung around 2 people, her best friend Caroline Montana and another girl called Carmely, I’m not sure what her last name is but I think it starts with M,” she says. “ Thank you for your time, Miss Walker, we’ll be off now,” I say to her as I started walking towards the door. “Goodbye, please find my daughter’s killer,” she says pleadingly. “We’ll try Miss,” Marcus answers.

“Okay let’s go back and we’ll go interview them,” I tell Marcus. I then called Channing and told her to look up Mason Reid and Caroline Montana. We walked into the building and were met with a man that I’ve never seen before. Blackwell looked at me the same time I looked at him the same thought going through our heads. The unknown man is probably Max Niyan. He walked over to me and shook my hand. “ Hi, I’m Detective Niyan,” He says. “ Hello, I’m Agent Garcia,” he then shook Marcus’s hand. “ I’m agent Marcus Blackwell,” Blackwell said.

Marcus is a person who is easy to warm up to, so he’ll probably befriend Niyan. My team members and I are all friends and we’ve been working with each other for 5 years.  “Marcus and I met with the mother of the victim, the victim has a boyfriend called Mason Reid, I asked Channing to get information him and the victim’s best friend, Caroline Montana,” I tell them. “Did you guys find anything while we were gone?” Blackwell asks. 

“Well, we go the forensic report back from Dr. Wilson, he said that the victim was shot 4 times, 2 times in the chess, once in the head and once in the shoulder,” agent Ying said. “ And we’re working on finding out what gun matches the bullets,” Sari adds. “ Detective Niyan could you go with Blackwell to question the victim’s best friend? I asked Detective Niyan. “ yeah, Sure,” He answered. “ Oh, and ask her about Carmely, another friend of the victim,” I tell them. “ Yes ma’am,” Blackwell said tilting his head.  

Max Niyan I appreciate that she asked If I wanted to go instead of ordering me around. All the team members seem nice but they’re all pretty serious about their work. I work with high-profile cases like this.

We arrived at the 2 story house owned by Caroline Montana. Agent Blackwell knocked on the door and then we waited for her to open the door. No one answered so we assumed that she wasn’t home. We got back in the car and Agent Blackwell got out his phone. “Channing, can you tell us where Caroline Montana works?” He asked over the phone. After a while he said“ Thank you,”and hung up.

“She works at SN’s modeling agency, let’s go over there,” He suggests. “ sure lets go, also can you give me a run through of your interview with the victim’s mother,” I say. “ yeah sure,” He says and does exactly that.

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